Here is a piece of writing that I wrote for my creative writing course.
Like every
little girl Sunshine love to play with her friends at school but sometimes,
this is quite difficult for this wee girl as Sunshine is a bit different from all of the children in her
class. Sunshine is 7 years old with long
red hair and she has the most beautiful and the happiest face.
We all know
that everyone is the same but in the different way. due to Sunshine being
really poorly when she was a little baby. Sunshine has a Disability.
A Disability
is when someone is when someone has 1 nose or 1 arm. A Disability is when
someone cannot see. A Disability is when someone cannot hear. A Disability is
when someone cannot walk or talk.
With
Sunshine’s Disability she cannot walk or talk so she uses a really cool pink
wheelchair and Sunshine uses a special computer to talk. The special computer
talked out. So, when Sunshine uses the
computer with a head switch Sunshine can talk to everyone and tell everyone how
she feels or what she wants.
Sunshine has
a lot of friends, they are called Gemma, Alison, Sharon, Kim and Kara. But she has only 1 best very friend called
Clobby.
Clobby is a
pink and yellow teddy bear which comes to life when no one is around except
from when Sunshine is around that Sunshine has since she was a baby. Sunshine feels that she can tell Clobby
everything and anything. Clobby is
always there for Sunshine and she takes that teddy everywhere that Sunshine
goes especially when she stays away from home, like to Disneyworld in Florida
and when Sunshine goes in to hospital.
Clobby the
teddy is the same as Sunshine in the way that he can’t talk much himself, he
only says Clobby! But Sunshine and
Clobby understands each other. No one
else can hear Clobby talking except from Sunshine. it is like that they have a
special super power between them. It is really, really cool.
As Sunshine
talks through a special computer. Like
every computer it breaks down and Sunshine don’t like it because she can’t talk
to her family and friends or she can’t do her school work.
When
Sunshine’s computer breaks, she just wants sit and hug Clobby and tell him what
she is feeling and her thoughts.
Sunshine has
a big sister called Feefee, Feefee is 2 years older than Sunshine. The sisters
do get along with each other but like all sisters or brothers they do like
to annoyed each other but the sisters
always are there each other. As Sunshine
has a Disability Feefee does watch out for her little sister.
Sometimes
Sunshine and Feefee don’t agree on things.
Feefee thinks
that it is a lot of Rubbish that Sunshine still has Clobby, Feefee
always says to Sunshine “you are too old to have a teddy, Clobby isn’t a real
person, he is just a stuff toy” Sunshine really hates it when Feefee says that
and it really hurts Sunshine’s feelings.
Sunshine
wishes that Feefee would see how important Clobby is to Sunshine, but sadly not
everyone sees how important little things are to people in this world.
Sunshine and
Feefee lives with their loving and caring Mum and Dad. The family always is out and about doing fun
things like swimming, bowling, going to the cinema, going shopping, going out
for dinner and going on family’s holiday to Disney world. The family really loves spending time
together.
One day the
family were out at swimming then they went out for dinner because they always
get really hungry after they have been swimming. Sunshine decided that day that she isn’t
taking Clobby with her that day, so she left Clobby sitting on her bed where
Clobby always sits when he isn’t out and about and Sunshine told Clobby that
she will see him later and Clobby said Clobby Clobby Clobby Clobby which
Sunshine knew that means OK Sunshine, have a nice time see you later.
The family
went off to the swimming pool and then to an Italian restaurant. The family had a great day. Especially Sunshine as swimming and eating
Italian food are Sunshine’s favourite things to do.
Sunshine was starting to feel really tired towards
the end of the family ‘s dinner because swimming always makes Sunshine feels
tired. Sunshine said to her Mum through
her special computer “I am really tired Mum; I want to go home and see
Clobby. Feefee buts in and said “Clobby
is a just stuff teddy, he isn’t a not really person” Sunshine just looked at
Feefee and said “whatever sis!”
The family
went home in the car. When they were nearby their house, they could see a lot
of smoke and wondered where the smoke was coming from as we got nearer they
realized that the smoke was coming from their house.
The house is
a up and down stairs but as Sunshine is in a wheelchair Sunshine’s bedroom is
downstairs with a bathroom.
When
Sunshine and her family drew up in front of the house the family realized that
the smoke was coming across the back of the house so Sunshine ‘s Dad went
around the back and he saw that it was Sunshine’s bedroom on fire!
Sunshine’s
Dad ran back around to the front and shouted “IT IS SUNSHINE’S BEDROOM, CALL
THE FIRE SERVICE”
The fire
service came really quickly and mangled to get fire out and Sunshine’s bedroom
was all smokery but Sunshine wasn’t worrying about the bedroom or her bed or
her television or her alexa because Sunshine knew that she could get her
bedroom decorated and buy all of the
things. The only thing that Sunshine was
really really worry about was her very best friend Clobby. When she heard her dad shouting it is
Sunshine’s bedroom Sunshine just cried and cried, the only thing that she could
of think was her Clobby.
Once the
fire service got the fire out. A nice fireman came to Sunshine and gave her
Clobby and the fireman said “he was asking for you” Sunshine said to the
fireman through her computer “thank you very much he is my very best friend”
Clobby was
all black and smelled of smoke and Sunshine just hugged him and said “you are
OK”
Once the
family got Sunshine’s bedroom decorated Clobby was still all black and smelling
of smoke so Sunshine ‘s did put Clobby in to the washing machine for a few
hours and once Clobby came out of the washing machine he was back to his
colours and smelled nice. Sunshine was
very happy to see Clobby back to himself and they lived very happy together
even when Sunshine got older.
The End.
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